tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2815028536613823547.post196634855519043690..comments2023-05-31T08:54:38.876-05:00Comments on Novel Pretender: RamblingsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2815028536613823547.post-37204560157089867952010-09-12T08:20:29.848-05:002010-09-12T08:20:29.848-05:00Thanks Annie, that is a ctually a very helpful com...Thanks Annie, that is a ctually a very helpful comment! Now I am trying to think of a word that works as well as "gently" but with a better rhyme. : )<br /><br />~Jane~Lindseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09445235926125001773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2815028536613823547.post-16695421079666935472010-09-12T02:48:06.246-05:002010-09-12T02:48:06.246-05:00I came across your blog via "From the Desk of...I came across your blog via "From the Desk of a Young Writer". I must say I <i>love</i> the rhyme and rhythm of your poem! (There's something so "stately" about a rhyming poem.) I could feel the thunder as I read :) And if you wanted to improve it, I'd suggest perhaps substituting "gently" for a work that rhymed better with "lightly", but those are just my thoughts and it really is great as it is :)<br /><br />Blessings,<br />AnnieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com